Our Evaluation of final cut

here is me and dan evaluating our film due to circumstances beyond our control we had to do our evaluation separate to hannah and nicolas

Character Profiles - Pictures

The Janitor(Daniel Ross).
The Killer(Ryan Moffitt).
The Victim(Nicolas Inzelmann).

our continuity film

Thriller Opening Treatment - Dan

The base story for the 'film' revolves around a detective trying to solve a chain of murders committed by killer. Unknown to said Detective, he is stalked by the killer various times and, had it not been for a friend requesting his assistance, he may have died.

OPENING SCENE ::

A man is in his house, reading a newspaper with reading glasses. He hears the crack of a branch in his garden, getting up and opening the door to investigate. He finds nothing. He turns back, closing the door behind him, and as something is swung at his head from behind, the scene ends.

Cue titles.

SETTING: A House.

CAST
Man. (Wears a shirt and tie and also makes use of reading glasses. Middle-aged?)


SHOT LIST:

- Establishing shot of the room the man is in.
- Panning shot of the man reading the newspaper while adjusting his glasses.
- Zoom shot on the man's face as he hears the branch crack.
- Mid-shot as he turns to go to the door.
- Match-En-Action of him opening the door.
- Over-The-Shoulder shot of him looking at the garden, seeing nothing.
- Long shot from outside of him turning and closing the door.
- Close Up of his face as he heads back to his chair and is attacked.