Thriller Opening Treatment - Hannah

The scene opens with the establishing shot of the school bathrooms. There is music playing quietly and softly in the background. There are opening credits and the title. There is a body covered in blood lying on the floor. There are close-ups of the persons' battered face and body. Suddenly one of the bathroom doors flies open with a crash and someone runs out with a backpack on. All that you can see of the mysterious person is a black shaddow against the wall which soon escapes out of the bathrooms. The camera chases the person and follows them down the corridors of the school. After a couple of minutes the person is chased into a dead-end, they bang the door and shake it in anger trying to get out. There is a long-shot of the corridor and the person, there back is facing the camera. There is then a mid-shot of the person slowly turning around, until you can se their full face clearly facing the camera. They press themself up against the door. There is then a close-up of their eyes and they say, "Im sorry, i didn't mean to". The title is then shown again.

Thriller Opening Treatment Ryan Moffitt

due to technical dificulteis my treatment had to be uploaded at a later date

Media film

Story:

Start: attack on woodland ramblers titles

Middle: reporter reports on the attacks meets a priest who has some information

End: reporter solves the crimes and defeats the beast with the priests help

Start: two characters are walking through the woods enjoying each others company and some refreshments then a unknown person attacks. Violently. Credits roll. Reporter at her/his desk reading a paper (title of paper reads “FOREST ATTACK”) paper gets slammed down credits roll background is of paper headlines

Shot 1 Extreme close up of bike wheels turning fast cut to chains of the bike then fast cut to close up of the wheel braking and skidding on dirt, long shot of person getting off bike and dropping it on the floor.

Shot 2 P.O.V shot of the stalker looking at the person (blurred around the edges and black and white) panning through the undergrowth.

Shot 3 music builds up with a tempo that is getting faster, person2 (person’s mate4) jumps from around the tree music ends and the person1 jumps back toppling on to the floor and yells abuse at his mate.

Shot 4 P.O.V shot of the stalker looking at the scene bellow (blurred edges and b&w) panning through the undergrowth.

Shot 5 OTS shot over (person2 looking down at person1) lends a hand to person1 both are laughing now cam cuts to a close up of there hands clasped together cam cuts to a high angle shot of them walking around person1 pushing his bike

Shot 6 P.O.V shot of the stalker watching them and stalking them (blurred edges and b&w) tracking through the undergrowth slowly music start to build up very dramatic and scary building tension.

Shot 7 low angle of the two people conversing and walking over the camera music building up

Shot 8 the two hear a sound and look around fast cut to-

Shot 9 P.O.V shot stalker running towards the two from behind person 2 turns and the stalker jupms onto him breaking his neck camera cuts to a mid shot and person 1 turns goes to run away and trips over his bike

Shot 10 P.O.V stalker seizes its opportunity and leaps onto person1 slashing his flesh stalker hears sound and runs away cut to long shot of the massacrer. Fade to black

Shot 11 mid shot of reporter reading headlines then slaming down paper onto camera credits roll